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Post by foxrock66(Roadkill) on Sat Apr 19, 2008 2:40 pm

CCP: The Beta Squad Chronicles. PT I

Prologue: The Clone Commando squad designated Beta was established after Geonosis. It’s members were not trained in commando tactics like the men of Delta Squad. They were simply soldiers. Soldiers who excelled in their own specific fields.

The leader, simply called Trooper, an honest and no-nonsense type of soldier, was picked up by the Republic Commanders after the landing on Geonosis. His swift sense of command during the assault saved the entire landing party, enabling them to reach one of the droid foundrys in time to disable it before it could begin to send out the legions of droids within.

The engineer, Revan, named after a jedi hero from Republic history, was found holed up inside a bunker armed with only his pistol. He had been protecting his commanding officer there for hours, after he had been fatally wounded in battle. The commander later died, but Revan was promoted to Corperal for his bravery.

Death. The heavy weapons specialist. His name says it all. He single handedly wiped out an entire droid platoon using the remains of a gunship. A dark humored and often quiet soldier, who will do anything to get the job done. Unfortunately, even if it means putting his fellow soldiers in danger.

Finally, the unnamed soldier AT-57. A wisecracking fellow who rarely seems to know what’s going on, but lethal in a fight. He is the most cautious member of Beta Squad, as well as the only one trained as a field medic.

These four soldiers are about to begin the most dangerous mission of their lives……

Dantooine: Clone Wars: Day 315

“Hey, Trooper? What do you think this is?”

Trooper turned his head to where his field medic was calling from across the now ruined estate of the farmer Marius. AT-57 was holding a long cylindrilical object, waving it like some sort of prize.

“Bring it here.”

The medic followed the order swiftly, dropping the object into his commanding officer’s hand with a triumphant smile.

“Is it important?”

Trooper glanced at AT’s smiling face before examining the object. It had an opening at one end, as well as some switches. Strange that AT didn’t know what it was, but then, he WAS AT.

“It’s a lightsaber, AT. And put your helmet back on.”

“Oh,” the medic hastened to comply, and once he had his helmet on, asked again, “Is it important?”

Trooper smirked at AT’s inquisitiveness.

“Yeah, it could be important. Marius was no jedi.”

“Great.”

“Well, maybe. It could just be an heirloom or something though.”

“Oh..”

“Keep going through the rubble, I’ll have Revan examine this when we get back.”



An hour later, Trooper and AT walked into the command post ten miles south of what was once the estate of the late Gui Marius. They entered the command room where they were immediately met by Revan.

“I see you’re back, sir. Find anything?”

“Maybe. AT found this in the rubble, what do you make of it?”

Revan took the saber in his hand and examined it.

“Well, uh, it’s a lightsaber, sir”

“Hey, you were right!” AT piped up.

Trooper glanced sideways at AT before continuing.

“I know what it is. What do you think it was doing at the Marius Estate?”

“I couldn’t say, sir,” Revan replied,”Could be an heirloom, perhaps?”

“You were right agai-“

“Hush, AT” Trooper turned back to Revan. “Maybe, but I want you to analyze it anyway. See if there is anything unusual about it.”

“Will do, sir.”

“Before you go, where is Death?”

“On the roof, sir”

“Thank you, now get busy.”



Trooper left AT with Revan and headed to the roof. When he got there he found Death lying on his stomach with a sniper rifle pointed towards the estate.

“What are you doing?”

Death answered without looking back.

“Nothing…”

“Don’t tell me that soldier.”

Death sighed audibly, “Just tryin to see if there’s anything out there.”

“I admire your dedication, but our radar will pick up any movement out there.”

Death snorted, “Hmph, I don’t trust comps.”

“Well…” Trooper paused for a moment. “See anything?”

“…..No…”

“Do you have a problem with me right now?”

“Why do you ask that, sir?”

“The only time you come up here is when something is bothering you.”

Death didn’t respond.

“And I thought maybe since I didn’t let you come with me and AT, you might be a little… Ticked?”

“Im a professional, sir. I don’t get….. Ticked”

“Well-“

“SIR! You need to see this!”

“Coming, Revan!” Trooper called back downstairs. “Death, you coming?”

“… Yeah, I guess I’d better.”

“Bloody right.”



Back downstairs, Revan explained what he had found.

“The lightsaber hadn’t been there very long, it doesn’t have any scorch mark that would indicate it had been in the fire. And, I found some DNA on it.”

“Well?”

“Well, sir, I ran about fifty cross-checks to be sure I wasn’t mistaken. It took some digging to find the proper match. But the DNA pattern is identical to one jedi Cypher Dios.”

“Well, sir, the thing is, Cypher Dios died. Over ten years ago.”

“Bloody heck…” Death breathed out.


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Re: CCP: The Beta Squad Chronicles PT 1

Post by Guest on Sat Apr 19, 2008 3:53 pm

AWESOME! BRAVO! That is some very talented writing, Fox. LOVE it! I can wait for the next installment.
>a handsome man enters
>everyone - "Flashbang!"
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Re: CCP: The Beta Squad Chronicles PT 1

Post by Sgt Rock on Sat Apr 19, 2008 4:05 pm

ummm no its sgt rock!
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Re: CCP: The Beta Squad Chronicles PT 1

Post by Delta 66 on Sat Apr 19, 2008 6:35 pm

Ok some people know this: I play under mainly 2 names 'Delta 66' and 'Flish' but the thing is Flish is Delta 66 in my own Star Wars fantasy world -just like Delta 07 is Sev, Delta 40 is Fixer, 62 is Scorch. My full designation is [RC-1366 (Flish) of Delta Squad]
So I need a back story. What I got so far is that 66 Flish was a reject clone that wasn't supposed to go into service. Can you work me in Foxy?
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Re: CCP: The Beta Squad Chronicles PT 1

Post by Guest on Sat Apr 19, 2008 8:57 pm

Can he be the clone that was a reject because he was gay?

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Post by Delta 66 on Sat Apr 19, 2008 9:08 pm

careful Fleshwang
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Re: CCP: The Beta Squad Chronicles PT 1

Post by TheMan on Sun Apr 20, 2008 2:50 am

whats fingerbang up to now?

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Re: CCP: The Beta Squad Chronicles PT 1

Post by Guest on Sun Apr 20, 2008 7:57 am

Wow fox you are a good writer.

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Re: CCP: The Beta Squad Chronicles PT 1

Post by foxrock66(Roadkill) on Sun Apr 20, 2008 8:03 am

Thx, all. AND BE NICE U 2!!
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Re: CCP: The Beta Squad Chronicles PT 1

Post by Guest on Sun Apr 20, 2008 10:35 am

everyone be good to eachover ¬¬ lol jokes

nice work fox Smile your a talented writer

maybe next bit like Beta squad needs bak up from the snipers squad PSI!


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Re: CCP: The Beta Squad Chronicles PT 1

Post by Trooper on Fri Apr 25, 2008 6:03 am

ZOMG love! you're hired. Keep a writin.

However, here's something about me:

I was trained in Kamino as a Clone Pilot, crashed after being outnumbered on Geonosis. Blah blah...I'll stick with your story.

But I made friends with CC-6666, commander of the 222nd Legion of Clone Troopers, known as Commander Shark. He often has me give him advice and what not. So in a way, sometimes I control the 222nd legion. Thus I am Called 'CC-007' because I was the seventh clone created.



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Re: CCP: The Beta Squad Chronicles PT 1

Post by Guest on Fri Apr 25, 2008 8:40 am

Trooper wrote:But I made friends with CC-6666, commander of the 222nd Legion of Clone Troopers, known as Commander Shark. He often has me give him advice and what not. So in a way, sometimes I control the 222nd legion. Thus I am Called 'CC-007' because I was the seventh clone created. Smile

Ummm...in english, Trooper? Razz

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Re: CCP: The Beta Squad Chronicles PT 1

Post by foxrock66(Roadkill) on Fri Apr 25, 2008 5:08 pm

LOL. 'tis english me mates ! I get it, but I've got a pretty full character roster right now. If I can work that in, I will.
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Post by M3tr4 on Fri Apr 25, 2008 10:40 pm

Fox, dont forget Sgt. Sniffles Smile
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