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Post by AndyVC on Fri Oct 15, 2010 6:24 pm

my first poem:

Your angels

In the darkness i'll be your light,
In the end i'll be your beginning,
Through your tears i'll be your smile,
Through madness i'll be your sanity,
In hell you'll be my heaven,
Your angels shall set me free,
My last breath will be with thee.

and my most recent poem:

Love

You told me your goodbyes,
I fell like a falling star,
It felt like I was hit by a car,
You tossed me aside and I thought i'd die.

You partied like you were in the heavens,
I wandered the earth like a ghost,
Only to make the most,
I saw her then I was in heaven.

Our eyes met and it was love at first sight,
I was smart and sly,
She was quiet and shy,
We fell in love and it was a amazing night.


just leave your opinions if you want to.

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Re: Andy's Poems

Post by †)5h4d0w(† on Fri Oct 15, 2010 8:08 pm

Nice! Seems like you've had some recent inspiration Shocked Razz lol jk
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Post by Churminess on Sat Oct 16, 2010 3:24 am

I really like the last two lines of the first, and the last stanza of the second. Nice work.

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Post by AndyVC on Sat Oct 16, 2010 1:20 pm

I made a poem and showed it to darkspy, and as a result i'm posting it here.

CCP

We are Commandos,
Stealthy, Quick, Deadly.
We are the creatures in the dark,
Scary, Quiet, Efficient.

We are Clones,
Defending, Invading, Conquering.
We are the Republic's finest,
Helpful, Graceful, Efficient.

We are Gifted,
Special, Armed, and Dangerous.
We are Brothers,
Strong, Trained, and United.

We are the CCP.

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Post by Deviss on Sat Oct 16, 2010 1:53 pm

AndyVC wrote:CCP

We are Commandos,
Stealthy, Quick, Deadly.
We are the creatures in the dark,
Scary, Quiet, Efficient.

We are Clones,
Defending, Invading, Conquering.
We are the Republic's finest,
Helpful, Graceful, Efficient.

We are Gifted,
Special, Armed, and Dangerous.
We are Brothers,
Strong, Trained, and United.

We are the CCP.

Nicely done Very Happy

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Post by Darkspy on Sat Oct 16, 2010 2:00 pm

yup i liked it when i first read and i still like it now

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Post by Butters on Sat Oct 16, 2010 2:32 pm

I like the first two. Smile
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Post by Gunn3r on Sat Oct 16, 2010 5:05 pm

i like all three, the one about ccp is my fav followed by your angels

may i have permission to put the first verse of the ccp poem in my sig?
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Post by AndyVC on Sat Oct 16, 2010 5:14 pm

{CCP}Gunn3r wrote:may i have permission to put the first verse of the ccp poem in my sig?
Sure, just a fourth poem. life is a powerful inspiration.


As Time Flys

As time flys, Friends come and go,
As hearts heal, Love awakes to beauty,
As time is spent, Memories are made and forgotten,
As hearts break, Love dies waiting to be reborn.

As the day begins, A fallen angel descends,
As I come by, Your beauty mystifies me,
As the day ends, A fallen angel ascends,
As I close my eyes, Your memory burns at my soul.

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Post by Gunn3r on Sat Oct 16, 2010 5:31 pm

that one is easily my fav of the four, incredible.
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Post by AndyVC on Sat Oct 16, 2010 5:34 pm

{CCP}Gunn3r wrote:that one is easily my fav of the four, incredible.
Thanks, i'm only posting them because darkspy thinks i should.

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Post by Gunn3r on Sat Oct 16, 2010 5:35 pm

you should continue posting. Do u have more?
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Post by AndyVC on Sat Oct 16, 2010 5:39 pm

{CCP}Gunn3r wrote:you should continue posting. Do u have more?
I post them as i write them. With exception of Your angels.

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Post by Gunn3r on Sat Oct 16, 2010 5:40 pm

ok cool, i am def gonna be checkin this thread daily.
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Post by Mobius on Sat Oct 16, 2010 8:03 pm


Love every poem dude!

Andy is CCP's william shakespeare Razz


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Post by Darkspy on Sat Oct 16, 2010 8:03 pm

yeah i get first pick ha! now hes starting to make me wanna write poetry again -.-

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Re: Andy's Poems

Post by AndyVC on Sun Oct 17, 2010 8:57 am

You and I

You are my earth and I am your moon,
A fallen angel and A lost soul,
You are my day and I am your knight,
A goddess and A romantic.

When I talk to you, time stands still,
Misunderstood and Depressed,
When I see you, My heart aches,
longing and hopeful.

If I had the chance, We'd dance,
Slow and Steady,
If I had your love, We'd be forever,
Happy and Together.

Life is my path and You are my dream,

Time is spent and Memories were made,
No second chances and No forgiveness,
My heart was broken and Hers was healed,

I mustn't yield, and you mustn't shield,
Life is short and Love is long,
Live life and Tell story’s,
When together You and I are in heaven.

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Post by Churminess on Sun Oct 17, 2010 10:41 am

Your best yet IMHO, keep it up dude, they're beautiful.

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Post by AndyVC on Sun Oct 17, 2010 3:06 pm

Here is another little something from yesterday.


Life


If life gets difficult i'll push forward,
If life seems pointless i'll find a point,
When i'm lone i'll find someone,
When i'm tired i'll be awake,
If you need me i'll be there,
If you don't i'll be gone,
Life isn't fair for me by why can't i make it nice for you?

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Post by AndyVC on Sun Oct 17, 2010 8:59 pm

AndyVC wrote:
Love

You told me your goodbyes,
I fell like a falling star,
It felt like I was hit by a car,
You tossed me aside and I thought i'd die.

You partied like you were in the heavens,
I wandered the earth like a ghost,
Only to make the most,
I saw her then I was in heaven.

Our eyes met and it was love at first sight,
I was smart and sly,
She was quiet and shy,
We fell in love and it was a amazing night.

If anyone missed it "You and She" was 2 different girls in the poem.

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Post by Gunn3r on Mon Oct 18, 2010 7:48 am

i got that, and awsome work on the next couple.

mello... no XD jk
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Post by Deviss on Mon Oct 18, 2010 8:18 am

For future reference, Mello, make your own Topic, don't hijack Andy's Wink

I'd like to use the Third Verse in my SIG, if you don't mind Andy Smile

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Post by AndyVC on Mon Oct 18, 2010 8:55 am

Deviss™ wrote:For future reference, Mello, make your own Topic, don't hijack Andy's Wink

I'd like to use the Third Verse in my SIG, if you don't mind Andy Smile

go ahead deviss,


a change in poem type for one:


Haiku


As the darkness comes,
Her beauty will take me away,
Back to the heavens.

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Post by Mello on Mon Oct 18, 2010 11:58 am

Deviss™ wrote:For future reference, Mello, make your own Topic, don't hijack Andy's
oh lol i thought this was a post your poems kinda thing

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Post by Hellnurse on Mon Oct 18, 2010 1:43 pm

Wow I see some ppl with a awesome talent here.

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