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Post by Mello on Tue Nov 23, 2010 8:17 pm

Only I can understand what's going on inside

Only I can understand why my soul, itself, has lied 

You think you know who I am 
But what you know is a sham
I am not the man you know
All of this has been a show

Only I can understand why i wince at every chide 

Only I can understand why the joy in life has died 

This blackness, consuming all
Deafens others to my call
Seclusion, my destiny 
All others less are than me

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Post by frang on Tue Nov 23, 2010 11:45 pm

Maybe because I'm a geezer, but the vibe coming off this poem makes we want to listen to Nirvana. Good job, well done.

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Post by Mello on Wed Nov 24, 2010 5:33 am

One thanks two ooh nirvana

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Post by Guest on Wed Nov 24, 2010 8:07 am

frang wrote:Maybe because I'm a geezer, but the vibe coming off this poem makes we want to listen to Nirvana. Good job, well done.

This. It has a Kurt Cobain feel.

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