Dark/Loner Poems

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Dark/Loner Poems

Post by Denjie on Sat Dec 18, 2010 10:39 pm

So now i will show you that side of me that no one rly likes.

The first peom:

My heart is Locked

Darkness has fallen, my heart is dead;
I feel my blood drain, it's no longer dark red
.My Soul is locked, so tightly bound;
I don't hear a beat, not the slightest sound.

I cry out in longing, wanting to be free;
I want to be let out, I want to be me.
This darkness is vengeful, so hateful indeed;
It makes my soul cold, causes my heart to bleed.

This soulless hell, I want freed of;
I can't stand it, I want to feel love.
Can you see my pain, it makes me so weak;
Burning through my veins, right as I speak.


My second one:

Knowing Me

You really think you know me? You really think you see?
How can you know who I am or what’s inside of me?
Have you ever seen the darkness? Or seen my anger vent?
You can’t understand me, or know who I am.
So do not push me please, or I’ll say “shut it and be damn”.

I told you the pain inside me, is something I cannot release;
So please do not try, to help me if you please.
You do not understand what’s inside me, for this you must agree;
Nor do I want you in here, to see the darkest of me.

So now I’ve said it straight, and as forward as I can be;
Leave me the fuck alone, or my anger you will see.
If this does not help, or make you walk away;
Be for-warned, that I will walk away.

A loner I became, and a loner I will stay;
For it seems that all I do, is shove people away.
I hurt people’s feelings, I fill them all with pain;
I never wanted this life, that darkness caused to stain.

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Re: Dark/Loner Poems

Post by Hawk on Sun Dec 19, 2010 9:00 am

This is pretty awesome talent Denny!! Very well written...and pulls the reader in. It appeals to the emotional sides.....and the sides that ppl don't want to share.

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Post by Denjie on Sun Dec 19, 2010 9:20 am

Thanks Hawky. glad u like it.

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