Dark/Loner Poems

by Denjie Sat Dec 18, 2010 10:39 pm

So now i will show you that side of me that no one rly likes.

The first peom:

My heart is Locked

Darkness has fallen, my heart is dead;
I feel my blood drain, it's no longer dark red
.My Soul is locked, so tightly bound;
I don't hear a beat, not the slightest sound.

I cry out in longing, wanting to be free;
I want to be let out, I want to be me.
This darkness is vengeful, so hateful indeed;
It makes my soul cold, causes my heart to bleed.

This soulless hell, I want freed of;
I can't stand it, I want to feel love.
Can you see my pain, it makes me so weak;
Burning through my veins, right as I speak.

My second one:

Knowing Me

You really think you know me? You really think you see?
How can you know who I am or what’s inside of me?
Have you ever seen the darkness? Or seen my anger vent?
You can’t understand me, or know who I am.
So do not push me please, or I’ll say “shut it and be damn”.

I told you the pain inside me, is something I cannot release;
So please do not try, to help me if you please.
You do not understand what’s inside me, for this you must agree;
Nor do I want you in here, to see the darkest of me.

So now I’ve said it straight, and as forward as I can be;
Leave me the fuck alone, or my anger you will see.
If this does not help, or make you walk away;
Be for-warned, that I will walk away.

A loner I became, and a loner I will stay;
For it seems that all I do, is shove people away.
I hurt people’s feelings, I fill them all with pain;
I never wanted this life, that darkness caused to stain.

by Hawk Sun Dec 19, 2010 9:00 am

This is pretty awesome talent Denny!! Very well written...and pulls the reader in. It appeals to the emotional sides.....and the sides that ppl don't want to share.

by Denjie Sun Dec 19, 2010 9:20 am

Thanks Hawky. glad u like it.

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