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Post by Durza on Thu Apr 21, 2011 2:26 pm

Got bored so I guess I'll post this, its one of my poems from Freshy Accelerated English:

Music

Notes on a page, turned into sound
Woven like an intricate web, beautiful as life itself.
More intoxicating than any drug, an addiction from the start
Creating a bond like a fire, growing the more you feed it.
Hooked like a fish on a line, you cannot get free from it,
And yet you donít struggle, this is one addiction you do not mind.

Now, listening isnít enough to satisfy your desire for more,
You must begin to write it too, once you start you cannot stop
Blending chords and notes like a madman, this is what its all about,
No one will try and stop you, they like your creations, and you will write them till you die
The only thing left to do now is pass on the love of music to your children.
And so it begins again, a spark in a new being.


Let me know what you think!
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Re: Tell me what you think...

Post by zeb k on Wed May 18, 2011 12:06 pm

noice one man. its good Smile
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