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Post by Denjie on Tue Jun 12, 2012 4:48 pm

A song I wrote recently, it's got a hard rock/metal feel to it.


Have you seen that fear inside,
Itís the only thing keeping us alive.
So dark, so cold it clenches us tight,
It grabs my heart, and burns out the light.

Why, oh why doesnít it ever end,
It tryís to break me but I will not bend.

How long do we go on,
Taking our chances where we donít belong.
Feeling cold and dark inside,
Breaking free is what turns the tide.

The pain, it sears the heart,
And now itís ripped us both apart.
With bloodshed and tears weíre cast away,
We look up, as night overcomes the day.

Why, oh why doesnít it ever end,
It tryís to break me but I will not bend.

How long do we go on,
Taking our chances where we donít belong.
Feeling cold and dark inside,
Breaking free is what turns the tide.

The darkness is trembling I feel it shake,
How much more can I last before I break,
I never wanted this darkness to live,
What part of myself do I have to give,
I want it to end to bleed it out,
I feel it inside, all I want to do is shout.

Why, oh why doesnít it ever end,
It tryís to break me but I will not bend.

How long do we go on,
Taking our chances where we donít belong.
Feeling cold and dark inside,
Breaking free is what turns the tide.


comments appreciated.

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Re: Survive

Post by frang on Tue Jun 12, 2012 5:17 pm

True story. Read this while listening to Rammstein. The sentences matched the heavy rhythms of Rosenrot very well. Good job.

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Re: Survive

Post by Rinku on Tue Jun 12, 2012 5:53 pm

Some part of me reads this song to the tune of "The Kids Aren't Alright" by The Offspring.

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Re: Survive

Post by Hawk on Wed Jun 13, 2012 6:57 am

WOW! You have improved greatly! That was really good! it invokes sadness!

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Re: Survive

Post by adam on Mon Aug 13, 2012 12:07 am

Oh sorry to post so late just checking out the art section and saw music... Cool song u get a nice double bass drum with that Robert Trujillo on bass and raspy voiced singer that can jam you got a good song =)
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