Art Discussion/Q&A
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Art Discussion/Q&A
Basically what the title says, Any questions ya'll got, post 'em here. One or all of us will try to answer it the best we can. And if ya got any info or somethin to share, DON'T HESITATE!! none of us here knows everything.
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Re: Art Discussion/Q&A
I'll attempt to answer any questions you have about GIMP, and some about Photoshop to the best of my ability, too.
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Re: Art Discussion/Q&A
Good work boys! lovin the progress we are making!
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Re: Art Discussion/Q&A
Likewise, I'll give you my 2 cents if I can help.
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Re: Art Discussion/Q&A
Could any of you plz critique these three for me?
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Re: Art Discussion/Q&A
I'm not great at critiquing, but I like the top one. Only thing I don't really like is the font, but that's just me.
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Re: Art Discussion/Q&A
im not one of the sig makers but id say that in the batman one, half of batman is a little bit too dark. makes it hard to see him
but of course im no expert
so dont worry if the big guys on campus say its fine then ignore my comment xD
but of course im no expert
so dont worry if the big guys on campus say its fine then ignore my comment xD
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Re: Art Discussion/Q&A
The Batman one is too dark, and the render is way off to the side. Sometimes, making it to the side helps, but with yours he's so small that you can hardly see him, and that takes the focus from batman and puts it to the background. Try making him bigger, and centering him a little bit more. Also, try to use some soft light brushes. The font doesn't really flow very well, and it's also very hard to see because of the darkness.
The Crysis one and the Car one are decent, but the font sticks out again, and the backgrounds aren't very good. Try to look for backgrounds and stuff of that sort on Deviant Art. http://www.deviantart.com/ Maybe try putting them on the background, and fitting in your effects and brushes with the background, or over the render. But, remember to no take focus away from the render, and keep it from getting blurry.
The Brandon Jabobs one is the best out of the bunch, but the splatter sort of stuff on either side of him look way too sharp, and the font is once again out of place. Over all good, but still a little bit lacking.
Keep it up Vandal, and remember to look for tutorials, they help a lot. You can find hundreds of really good tutorials on Deviant Art. Start with the more simple ones, and work you way up.
The Crysis one and the Car one are decent, but the font sticks out again, and the backgrounds aren't very good. Try to look for backgrounds and stuff of that sort on Deviant Art. http://www.deviantart.com/ Maybe try putting them on the background, and fitting in your effects and brushes with the background, or over the render. But, remember to no take focus away from the render, and keep it from getting blurry.
The Brandon Jabobs one is the best out of the bunch, but the splatter sort of stuff on either side of him look way too sharp, and the font is once again out of place. Over all good, but still a little bit lacking.
Keep it up Vandal, and remember to look for tutorials, they help a lot. You can find hundreds of really good tutorials on Deviant Art. Start with the more simple ones, and work you way up.
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Re: Art Discussion/Q&A
Deks pretty much covered it. The fonts are my my biggest peeve. Keep practicing!
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Re: Art Discussion/Q&A
My second attempt at the same style as the Brandon Jacobs
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Re: Art Discussion/Q&A
Make sure the stuff in front of the render is out of the way, it takes some of the focus away from the render. You always want it to be clean in front of the main part of the render. I'd also make the render a little bit bigger than it is. Other than that, it's very good.
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